Blog Entry #13

The most major changes that I had to make after I combined all three papers was finding a good way to transition between them. I had to make sure all of the information flowed paragraph to paragraph. At this point in time, the part of my paper that needs the most editing is the format itself. I feel as though my paper is all over the place and I need to find balance and structure. With the help of Natasha, who is peer editing my paper, I will hope to gain some positive criticism that will bring up points that I would not of thought of myself. I also hope to spend time in these next couple of days and really sit down with my paper and revaluate where I want to go with it and how I can complete the most promising paper that I potentially can.